Hello everyone, today I’m going to share a poem in hindi which I wrote 1 yr ago on 13 jan 2017. (when I was 14 yrs old) in my hindi poem collection Yayavar, it may not be that good, but still I wanna share with you all.. So let’s begin…
।।काश मैं नादान होता।।
काश मैं नादान होता,
इस विवरण की दुनिया से दूर होता।
न कोई चिंता होती,
न कोई प्रशनवाचक होता।
बस एक मुस्कान होती,
जिसका कोई कारण न होता।
एक संतोष होता,
जिसका कोई अंत न होता।
न बुलाता कोई कार्य के लिए,
आराम से बैठे ठाठ होता।
न कोई जिम्मेदारी होती,
न समस्याओं का ताज होता।
न जीवन की गहराई समझ होती,
न आंसुओं का सागर होता।
न मैं समझदार होता,
काश मैं नादान होता।
– अवनी
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You write great poems in Hindi .
Just keep writing ❤
Plus , if you get time do go through my work as well . Much love
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Thank you sooo much!!🙏😍
I’ll surely visit your blog..😄❤
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..which would have been me ..
I wish I was a nadar,
This description would be far from the world.
There was no worry,
No one would have been prasanna.
Just had a smile,
There is no reason for it.
There was a satisfaction,
No end
For no work called,
It was a chic sitting comfortably.
There would be no responsibility,
No problems will be crowned.
Without understanding the depth of life,
There was no tears of ocean.
Neither would I be wise,
I wish I was a Nadan.
– Avni
is it right? what is Yayavar?
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Haha..😂😂 Good attempt…😆👏
Thanks for the conversion was incredible..🙈😂😂😂
I hope that you understood the poem very nicely..😌😛😛
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It’s just Google translate, line by line 😆
Let me see the translation again…
How are you doing? How was the exam so far?
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Sorry to say, but Google needs to improve in Hindi..😂
Haha.. Don’t worry I’ll soon translate it in English..😄
Yesterday was my first exam, Hindi.. The paper was very easy.. I hope the marking would be lenient as well..🤓
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Don’t worry, I was just passing by your blog and only these post that I haven’t read so… 😂
The marking will be 💯
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Haha..😄
Thank you so much for reading my posts..🤗💞🌈
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😁👍
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Bahut hi khubsurat lekhan.👌👌
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Dhanyawad🙏🙏😇
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Kash aisa hota
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Yup, kitna accha hota..😊😏
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i think one day you are going to be a successful writer. keep it up
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Thank you sooo much🙏😇.. I’ll try my best..😄
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Ohh sometimes all wanna be little again .. btw I have also written poem relevant this .. nicely written
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Hmm.. Childhood and it’s innocence is always cherished😄.. Oh I’ll surely read your poem soon.. Thank you..😇
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Do read in your free time
“wanna be little again”
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Okay sure..😄👍
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Thanks 😊😊
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Great scope for good Hindi poetry buddy — talking about your future self! Do keep working on it! Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you sooo much😇… Ya, I’ll surely improve and keep working on it.😊 I’m happy that you enjoyed my blog… Thanks😄
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Ah, BEAUTIFUL! 😀😊
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Thank you😊.. I’m glad you liked😇😊
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Lovely and beautiful poem👌
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Thank you sooo much.. 😇
I’m glad that you liked 😋😊
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Most welcome 😊
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😊
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Awweeesome… and u wrote it when u were just fourteen OMG 😮
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Yes.. God promise.. I know people won’t believe but its true. My best friend and my mother too knows it.. It’s a bit hard to prove but it’s true..😅 I’ve more poems of that time to share. (I’d a passion for hindi poems till last year)
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so publish them…. would love to read them 🙂
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Yes soon.. Actually now my exams are going on and then there’ll be boards from march. So I’ve decided to publish all of them between this time. This will help to update my blog and won’t take much time than selecting any new topic.. So, I’m sorry.. But you’ll have to wait..
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ohk we will wait wo kehte hai na ‘Sabra ka fall meetha hota hai’ BTW best of luck for ur xams.. go rock it 🙂
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I’m nervous.. Kahin aapko Sabra ka fal meetha nahi laga toh!? Please don’t expect much from the 14 yr old me.. Thank you for your well wishes.. 😊😊
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see when I have faith in u, I know ur posts are worth to read 🙂
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Okay.. Thanks for your faith.. I’ll try my best not to break it.. ☺ bye.. Now I’m going to study..😊
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bye 🙂
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